Thursday, September 28, 2006

SHE

Shot through the heart,
I lay in the field,
and several lay beside me
sans sword or shield.

Woke up then startled
in the night, I did.
And realised i was fine,
but shivering like a kid.

The next day came and went,
so did many more.
The dream was forgotten,
and with it all the gore.

And then one day I met her,
she was like morning breeze.
Her touch was soft,her eyes deep,
every bad dream had to cease.

She was meant to be, I knew
from the first day we met.
And I felt she sensed it too,
I just know it,would have had a bet.

And then she just left me,
shattered and alone.
Cut me with a knife,
destroyed all that was sown.

And then i got to know,
there were many more.
Before me,with hearts broken,
atleast 3,maybe even 4.

That night the dream reappeared,
was again struck through the heart.
But now i knew the reason why,
and how she had played a part.

Love is a silly game,
you trip, you win, you lose.
And since are very very rare,
at loss,one sinks in booze.

I still sometimes remember,
the days,the moments real sweet.
But then I think why,
and crush her under my feet.

Swore never to fall in love,
and never to trust a girl.
Was hurt once,but not again
never to be stuck again in a swirl.

And then she came,
more beautiful, tender and sweet.
And I knew she wont ditch me,
knew it with every passing beat.

One never knows for sure,
where life takes or leads.
You could remain strung in a necklace,
or scatter away like beads.

Its good to be hurt once,
to cry and to plea.
So that when you meet the special one,
you know how good is she.

(nt my story)

9 comments:

D said...

"sans" sword or shield...lol...
the french are coming!!!

but seriously dude, awesome... the rhyme scheme, the way you used the battlefield concept... mast tha, especially like the
"And I knew she wont ditch me,
knew it with every passing beat."
stanza...

keep it up! let's read more of aragon fréquemment!

Aragorn said...

Guys
pls post ur blog ids too.thnx a lot.

shravni said...

trés bien!!

Phoenix said...

i love the moral of the story:P
waise aapke sath itna kuch hua hamein pata bhi nahi!!
:O

Reminds me of "everybody hurts..."
keep writing...

Aragorn said...

@vivek:
thanx fr the anglo frnch comment.waise i thought sans was an eng wrd too.
@shravni:
merci beaucoup
@phoenix
itna bada likha tha,nt my story, aur kya likhta.waise didnt gt the drift.

Anonymous said...

Wah! wah!
Wah! Wah!

Bahut hi umda!

Anonymous said...

machau dude!!!i mean seriously great!!so you've grown as a poet...never knew you too write poetry..i really loved the strung in a necklace and scatter of beads...such a brilliant idea...superb..keep it up man!!

Anonymous said...

cool yaar
inspiration kya ya kon hai
sachchi batao aapne likhi hai?
mast ek dum
sachci machau
keep going

Anonymous said...

HaHa
Reminds me of my poems.