Sunday, October 01, 2006

What to Do?????????????

Ill tell you a little story
it may not be very new,
but the point's not whats been done,
the question's what to do

People come into my life,
they appear out of the blue.
they spread joy,they laugh, they cry
they make me feel fresh and new.
and then they suddenly kill me,
with a single word or deed,
and I sit shocked and hurt,
just thinking what to do.

I have a lot of friends,
ok,I have a few.
I can trust them with my life,
even if they dont have a clue.
But even they dont stand by always,
they take to the other court,
while I stand alone facing the music,
thinking as to what to do.

Its not worth taking names,not worth
beating them black and blue.
I just want to have someone,
someone who said"Him, I knew".
Someone who reads me over,
and gives me a pat on the shoulder,
and stays with me when I am alone,
and tells me what to do.

No doubt I got great friends,
no offense meant,its true.
I would find it hard to live,
if it hadnt been for you.
But this is an ode to all those,
who dont know what their friends want.
and maybe in my confusion,
I perhaps told you what to do.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

waah waah! sahi rhyming dude, and again padhke mazaa aa gaya... just a personal opinion poem mein to SMS lingo banta nahi hai :) ...

on a more serious note, what's up with you these days? talking of being killed or shot through the heart, always by friends? hamne aisa kya kar diya? or rather, aisa kya nahin kiya?

Anonymous said...

you need a gal, friend.

shravni said...

both your poems seem quite connected...
nice reading
:)

Aragorn said...

@ vivek
nothin yar
act i realise sms lingo wala funda.wen i was writin tab jaldi mein likh diya.par fir change kara par didnt get all i think.abhi kar deta hun.i agree,SMS lingo nahi banti in a poem.n waise kuch khas nahi kiya yar,jus that this is a topic i can think a lot on.:P abhi aage ke posts mein thoda diversify karne ki koshish karunga.

@ jwala
thnx fr the advice dude,me searching real hard.

Anonymous said...

something is def wrong withu
3 poems in a short span of just 4 days
bata bhi do
n nt fair
just got to know that i m not the friend u cn trust n rely on any hour of day :(
bt d poem wa awesome as long as it doesn't fit 4 u

Anonymous said...

something is def wrong withu
3 poems in a short span of just 4 days
bata bhi do
n nt fair
just got to know that i m not the friend u cn trust n rely on any hour of day :(
bt d poem wa awesome as long as it doesn't fit 4 u

Phoenix said...

good one..senti arpit:D

but u know how it is with people right...we once had that long talk+walk remember? about how most people are the wrong ones..

just live in the present...sooner or later u;d find the one or two that'll sick through :)

Anonymous said...

hmmm.. good

Aragorn said...

@phoenix
yeah i do remember tht walk+talk.
but then,you never stop thinking do you?????
@ayush
well a lil more than hmmmm expected frm next time onwards